Thursday, 9 May 2013

Documentary & Drama Evaluations

Documentary

For our first assignment this semester, we were given the task to create a five minute documentary focusing on the theme “Liverpool Stories”. As we would be travelling to Liverpool for three days to shoot, we were open to pretty much anything in the city to base our documentary on. For the project I worked with Sophie, Dalena, Charlotte, Chrissie and James.

During the first stages of planning and finding initial idea, I put forward the idea of looking into the Yellow Duckmarines based at Albert Docks. The group were intrigued by the idea, as was I, so we decided to research further into it. For the project, I became director I tried to get things organised along with the producer as quickly as possible. During a personal visit to Liverpool early on in the project, I was able to physically go over to the docks and meet the staff in charge of the Duckmarines, explain our intentions and get a strong contact with them early on. From this stage, Charlotte also emailed the manager and received filming confirmation before we travelled down. We were also able to book seats on the Duckmarines at this point to get ‘on-board’ shots during the tour.
We were very thorough in planning what we wanted to film in Liverpool and managed to create quite detailed storyboards, call sheets and interview questions with the staff and crew, and also the public travelling on the ducks.

The afternoon we arrived in Liverpool, we wasted no time heading down to the docks to assess location recces and organise various times for interviews and shooting – both in the offices and on the Ducks. That evening, after having a closer look around the docks and Liverpool, Sophie and I sat and planned extra footage that I wanted to include in our documentary.
On the second day in Liverpool, we arrived at the docks around 8.30am and wasted no time beginning to capture footage of the docks early on. We also took advantage of the quiet early morning to get our shots inside the booking office as we knew it would soon be busy as we were in Liverpool during half term. During the day, we set each other tasks to make sure that we were all busy collecting features that would be necessary. For example, while Charlotte and I were filming and sound recording on the tour, Dalena, Sophie, Chrissie and James would either be sound recording for atmos or collecting podcasts from passengers and the passing public.
Later on in the afternoon, we were able to collected more footage and recordings off two of the tour guides on the Duckmarines. Although one of the men did not wish to be filmed, he gave us a lot of interesting information that we would be able to edit and use in post-production as voiceovers to allow a constant flow of speech throughout. The second tour guide, Tony, gave us an interview staged in front of one of the Duckmarines.
Once we had finished filming down at the docks, we spent the last hour or two filming shots of where the tour passed in Liverpool, including the Queen Victoria Monument and both the Cathedrals. As we also had one of the tour leaflets that described the route, we tried our best to catch the bus in actions from the exterior and various points on the tour. Luckily, we caught some valuable shots, including bird’s eye view shots from a multi-storey car park, and a shot of the Duck passing in front of one of the Cathedrals late in the afternoon.
Fortunately, the weather in Liverpool was good, with very little wind. This meant that majority of both our sound and visual recordings were great quality once we looked back at them in the evening. Also, we managed to collect a great deal of footage in one day, leaving the following day just for any touch ups and added shots we wished to film.
The next day, we got up early to head to the docks for sunrise at approximately half seven. We decided the evening before that the main shot we wanted to capture on the final day would be a sunrise over the docks to introduce the documentary and the area we had been filming in. Unfortunately, the morning was extremely foggy and we were unable to capture the intended scene. However, we were more than happy with the amount of footage from the day before and after collecting some last few shots, were able to head back to Sheffield that morning.

Sophie was our visual editor for the project. From the beginning of post-production, I sat with her to go through the shots we had collected Liverpool and start constructing our documentary together. We created a rough timeline of the footage we had and what order we thought they would work best in. Debbie during the editing process helped us a lot with arranging and was able to give plenty of constructive criticism throughout to help better the project. The final piece was put together very differently from what we first discussed, however I feel that the finished outcome worked a lot better than if we had just stuck solidly to original plans.

Looking at the finished piece in our presentation, I was very happy with what we had produced. Although there were parts that could have be touched up and improved, such as some of the atmos over the docks that at times sounded unrealistic, I feel we worked extremely hard to produce the best that we could. We did lack at times to all contribute as a six-man team, but I feel that the hard work of others allowed us to produce a successful documentary. We also sent a finished copy to the Yellow Duckmarines staff, who were happy with our portrayal of their company and wished to use the footage on their website.

If I were to do the project again, I would definitely love the chance to choose a different role to work under and see how that would affect the ideas I could come up with and then contribute to the rest of the group.

Drama 

For our second half of the semester, we had to make a short five minute drama based on the theme of ‘journey’. For this project I would be working with Christie, Abi, Chrissie, Sophie and TS. Early on in planning stages I volunteered to be producer. After directing in the first half of assignments, I was interested in taking on the roles and seeing how much it would differ to my previous one.

We struggled at first coming up with ideas for the drama. We worried that some ideas maybe be boring, or too cliché. After a lot of deliberating we came up with the idea of a man running a drug rehabilitation group, and telling the company about ‘a friend’ he once knew who was an addict, but through a journey of self-recovery, managed to turn his life around. We wanted to try and add a twist to the story by giving away to the audience a sign that the friend he was talking about was in fact himself.
We pitched the idea to Debbie and the rest of the group, but received mixed thoughts about our idea. Majority of the group were not too keen on the idea, Debbie in particular stressed the point that a man in charge of a rehab group wouldn’t keep something like that hidden from the collective. We realized we would have to re-think about our ideas and find a strong, more realistic idea.
During our Easter break, Christie came up with the idea focusing on a transgender male, breaking the news to his mother that he wanted to changed gender and the journey to see if she would accept him for who he was, or if he would have to continue his life without her support. We really liked the idea and Christie continued to progress making a script.

After the Easter break, we returned to Uni to start planning the drama further. We were able to develop the script more, and also develop character profiles, shot lists and storyboards. TS was able to let us use his sister house in Sheffield to film most of our scenes, and we also found a great park nearby to shoot the rest. We were able to arrange everything we needed for production, leaving us just to find actors.
I emailed several drama companies in and around Sheffield over the next couple of weeks, but only managed to hear back from one, which eventually fell through. We also posted on university drama sites and smaller associations, but heard nothing back. Eventually, through friends we were able to cast the two male roles; one of our actors would have to travel down from Preston. We struggled mainly to find an older actress we could us to portray a mother. We discussed our difficulties and agreed to change the script so that the mother became a sister, hopefully allowing us to find a slightly younger actress. Luckily, one of the other groups passed on the details of an older female actress who didn’t fit their part. I took her contact, emailed her and she replied almost instantly, agreeing to take part.

As our main character would be coming down from Preston to shoot, we only had two days in which we had to shoot everything. We split the four scenes between the two days; the first day, we took a while to set up, and found it very time-consuming moving the camera around in a small space to produce various different camera angles. Our male actors were understanding and portrayed good performances allowing things to run as smoothly as possible.
On the second day of shooting, we met our female actress for the first time. We were quite nervous as we hadn’t met her before, but she was friendly and willing to try and help out where she could. As we had set up this time before our actress arrived, we were able to get straight on with filming without delaying time. Filming went very quickly and both scenes were done in half the time to the previous day.

Chrissie and TS were in charge of post-production editing. A rough cut of our intended film was made after we finished filming to show Debbie and received feedback. After watching it back, she wasn’t excited or moved by the film and found it quite tedious. She also noted that she didn’t like how the story was given away within the first scene. She gave a lot of constructive feedback for us to then go away and adapt. Christie and Chrissie then rearranged the order of the film, adding the first scene back as flashbacks to try and create more of a build-up. I sat in on a few of the sessions so I could keep track of the changes being made throughout. TS also went out and made further sound records to then edit and fit to help describe scenes better.
Debbie continued to check the changes made, and give her opinion on whether bits still didn’t work, and how we had improved on certain parts that she originally didn’t agree with.
Although it has been a long process, I feel that the finished piece has helped us to take on board advice and improve different techniques of planning and editing that we all as a group were previously unaware of.

Although I feel the end piece works well, there are a lot of things I feel that could have been better. If I were to do this project again, I would definitely look further into constructing dramas and how storyline work. I would also take into more consideration finding suitable actors for our roles. Our actress who played “Maggie” didn’t match the description alongside the actor who played “Ben”. We struggled with the time limits that we had, so I feel that we would need to plan further ahead in the future. All in all I feel we worked well as a team. We all contributed where needed and I feel that we have all learned valuable lessons and skills from undergoing this project, and can definitely see where were would do things differently next time. 

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