During our introduction seminars with Debbie, we watched a series of very different short dramas. Out of the series of films, two in particular stood out for me.
The first was Audio Tour. I found this four minute piece quite different from what I expected majority of dramas to appear like - however I did find it fascinating how differently it was structured. Narrated by an 'audio tape', a woman listening through headphones at a museum is highly surprised when the tape starts giving details about both herself and her current surroundings.
The sound design of the narrated tape worked really well in this piece and keeps the audience both interested and intrigued as to what it will pick up on next. I also noticed that atmos. was used throughout to help layer the piece and keep it somehow realistic. I feel that in drama, atmos plays an important part and we will need to carefully construct some fitting audio for our short drama.
It is a light-hearted piece with a essence of comedy throughout. Although the ended appears to be less joyful and slightly more serious, I feel that it doesn't ruin the entire piece and is unusual ending to an unusual story.
The second drama for Debbie's seminar I wanted to look back at again was About A Girl. Following a young 13 year old girl, obsessed with pop stars and very outspoken speaking about her day to day life, which involves the normal behaviour of a young teen, but also gives away the fact that her family life isn't great, and she may be hiding a big secret of her own.
The girl narrates her story to the audience, speaking directly to the camera as she walks down the side of a riverbank. Her story is also told with a series of flashback after she describes a certain scene - for example, she speaks about how her Dad takes her to the pub every weekend and buys her a coke and a bag of crisps. We then see either a flashback or flash-forward to the girl sat outside the pub on her own with the bag of crisps. However you can hear her Dad and his friends all inside the pub laughing and joking. At first, she gives the intention he takes her to the pub to spend some time with her and the drink and crisps are a treat. In reality, he has no choice in looking after her during this time period, so keeping her happy outside with these things allows him to then do what he wants.
As the film progresses, you begin to get the idea that things similar to this happen on a daily basis to the young girl, but by this point in her life she is just accustomed to it.
The flashback continue throughout the short drama. It appears she enjoys to talk about random things, like becoming famous and leaving her mum behind to actually cover something else. As we reach the end, she talks about how her mum found a puppy she was hiding and got the neighbours to get rid of it in the canal. She then quotes "Gotten dead good at hiding things from her since then". At this stage the girl has become quieter and the camera has started to pan over the location, suggesting something serious has or is about to happen. The girl then chucks a plastic bag into the canal, then as she walks away starts talking about random things again, like getting an ice cream, as if nothing has just happened. However, as she leaves, it becomes clear she has thrown a newborn baby into the canal.
This drama is incredibly different to the first one I observed. It is much deeper and has a more serious background story to define it. In the first drama, the colours were bright to match the light-hearted feel of it. In About A Girl, the colours through out are extremely bleak and dull, highly to represent the life and the area in which the young girl lives. Although it is a sensitive topic that is finally brought to light at the end, I feel the way the production has been created and the acting from the girl makes it incredibly realistic and hits home.
When preparing for our drama, to make it as realistic as possible, we have to ensure we find the right kind of actors that fit the script well.








