Thursday, 9 May 2013

Documentary & Drama Evaluations

Documentary

For our first assignment this semester, we were given the task to create a five minute documentary focusing on the theme “Liverpool Stories”. As we would be travelling to Liverpool for three days to shoot, we were open to pretty much anything in the city to base our documentary on. For the project I worked with Sophie, Dalena, Charlotte, Chrissie and James.

During the first stages of planning and finding initial idea, I put forward the idea of looking into the Yellow Duckmarines based at Albert Docks. The group were intrigued by the idea, as was I, so we decided to research further into it. For the project, I became director I tried to get things organised along with the producer as quickly as possible. During a personal visit to Liverpool early on in the project, I was able to physically go over to the docks and meet the staff in charge of the Duckmarines, explain our intentions and get a strong contact with them early on. From this stage, Charlotte also emailed the manager and received filming confirmation before we travelled down. We were also able to book seats on the Duckmarines at this point to get ‘on-board’ shots during the tour.
We were very thorough in planning what we wanted to film in Liverpool and managed to create quite detailed storyboards, call sheets and interview questions with the staff and crew, and also the public travelling on the ducks.

The afternoon we arrived in Liverpool, we wasted no time heading down to the docks to assess location recces and organise various times for interviews and shooting – both in the offices and on the Ducks. That evening, after having a closer look around the docks and Liverpool, Sophie and I sat and planned extra footage that I wanted to include in our documentary.
On the second day in Liverpool, we arrived at the docks around 8.30am and wasted no time beginning to capture footage of the docks early on. We also took advantage of the quiet early morning to get our shots inside the booking office as we knew it would soon be busy as we were in Liverpool during half term. During the day, we set each other tasks to make sure that we were all busy collecting features that would be necessary. For example, while Charlotte and I were filming and sound recording on the tour, Dalena, Sophie, Chrissie and James would either be sound recording for atmos or collecting podcasts from passengers and the passing public.
Later on in the afternoon, we were able to collected more footage and recordings off two of the tour guides on the Duckmarines. Although one of the men did not wish to be filmed, he gave us a lot of interesting information that we would be able to edit and use in post-production as voiceovers to allow a constant flow of speech throughout. The second tour guide, Tony, gave us an interview staged in front of one of the Duckmarines.
Once we had finished filming down at the docks, we spent the last hour or two filming shots of where the tour passed in Liverpool, including the Queen Victoria Monument and both the Cathedrals. As we also had one of the tour leaflets that described the route, we tried our best to catch the bus in actions from the exterior and various points on the tour. Luckily, we caught some valuable shots, including bird’s eye view shots from a multi-storey car park, and a shot of the Duck passing in front of one of the Cathedrals late in the afternoon.
Fortunately, the weather in Liverpool was good, with very little wind. This meant that majority of both our sound and visual recordings were great quality once we looked back at them in the evening. Also, we managed to collect a great deal of footage in one day, leaving the following day just for any touch ups and added shots we wished to film.
The next day, we got up early to head to the docks for sunrise at approximately half seven. We decided the evening before that the main shot we wanted to capture on the final day would be a sunrise over the docks to introduce the documentary and the area we had been filming in. Unfortunately, the morning was extremely foggy and we were unable to capture the intended scene. However, we were more than happy with the amount of footage from the day before and after collecting some last few shots, were able to head back to Sheffield that morning.

Sophie was our visual editor for the project. From the beginning of post-production, I sat with her to go through the shots we had collected Liverpool and start constructing our documentary together. We created a rough timeline of the footage we had and what order we thought they would work best in. Debbie during the editing process helped us a lot with arranging and was able to give plenty of constructive criticism throughout to help better the project. The final piece was put together very differently from what we first discussed, however I feel that the finished outcome worked a lot better than if we had just stuck solidly to original plans.

Looking at the finished piece in our presentation, I was very happy with what we had produced. Although there were parts that could have be touched up and improved, such as some of the atmos over the docks that at times sounded unrealistic, I feel we worked extremely hard to produce the best that we could. We did lack at times to all contribute as a six-man team, but I feel that the hard work of others allowed us to produce a successful documentary. We also sent a finished copy to the Yellow Duckmarines staff, who were happy with our portrayal of their company and wished to use the footage on their website.

If I were to do the project again, I would definitely love the chance to choose a different role to work under and see how that would affect the ideas I could come up with and then contribute to the rest of the group.

Drama 

For our second half of the semester, we had to make a short five minute drama based on the theme of ‘journey’. For this project I would be working with Christie, Abi, Chrissie, Sophie and TS. Early on in planning stages I volunteered to be producer. After directing in the first half of assignments, I was interested in taking on the roles and seeing how much it would differ to my previous one.

We struggled at first coming up with ideas for the drama. We worried that some ideas maybe be boring, or too cliché. After a lot of deliberating we came up with the idea of a man running a drug rehabilitation group, and telling the company about ‘a friend’ he once knew who was an addict, but through a journey of self-recovery, managed to turn his life around. We wanted to try and add a twist to the story by giving away to the audience a sign that the friend he was talking about was in fact himself.
We pitched the idea to Debbie and the rest of the group, but received mixed thoughts about our idea. Majority of the group were not too keen on the idea, Debbie in particular stressed the point that a man in charge of a rehab group wouldn’t keep something like that hidden from the collective. We realized we would have to re-think about our ideas and find a strong, more realistic idea.
During our Easter break, Christie came up with the idea focusing on a transgender male, breaking the news to his mother that he wanted to changed gender and the journey to see if she would accept him for who he was, or if he would have to continue his life without her support. We really liked the idea and Christie continued to progress making a script.

After the Easter break, we returned to Uni to start planning the drama further. We were able to develop the script more, and also develop character profiles, shot lists and storyboards. TS was able to let us use his sister house in Sheffield to film most of our scenes, and we also found a great park nearby to shoot the rest. We were able to arrange everything we needed for production, leaving us just to find actors.
I emailed several drama companies in and around Sheffield over the next couple of weeks, but only managed to hear back from one, which eventually fell through. We also posted on university drama sites and smaller associations, but heard nothing back. Eventually, through friends we were able to cast the two male roles; one of our actors would have to travel down from Preston. We struggled mainly to find an older actress we could us to portray a mother. We discussed our difficulties and agreed to change the script so that the mother became a sister, hopefully allowing us to find a slightly younger actress. Luckily, one of the other groups passed on the details of an older female actress who didn’t fit their part. I took her contact, emailed her and she replied almost instantly, agreeing to take part.

As our main character would be coming down from Preston to shoot, we only had two days in which we had to shoot everything. We split the four scenes between the two days; the first day, we took a while to set up, and found it very time-consuming moving the camera around in a small space to produce various different camera angles. Our male actors were understanding and portrayed good performances allowing things to run as smoothly as possible.
On the second day of shooting, we met our female actress for the first time. We were quite nervous as we hadn’t met her before, but she was friendly and willing to try and help out where she could. As we had set up this time before our actress arrived, we were able to get straight on with filming without delaying time. Filming went very quickly and both scenes were done in half the time to the previous day.

Chrissie and TS were in charge of post-production editing. A rough cut of our intended film was made after we finished filming to show Debbie and received feedback. After watching it back, she wasn’t excited or moved by the film and found it quite tedious. She also noted that she didn’t like how the story was given away within the first scene. She gave a lot of constructive feedback for us to then go away and adapt. Christie and Chrissie then rearranged the order of the film, adding the first scene back as flashbacks to try and create more of a build-up. I sat in on a few of the sessions so I could keep track of the changes being made throughout. TS also went out and made further sound records to then edit and fit to help describe scenes better.
Debbie continued to check the changes made, and give her opinion on whether bits still didn’t work, and how we had improved on certain parts that she originally didn’t agree with.
Although it has been a long process, I feel that the finished piece has helped us to take on board advice and improve different techniques of planning and editing that we all as a group were previously unaware of.

Although I feel the end piece works well, there are a lot of things I feel that could have been better. If I were to do this project again, I would definitely look further into constructing dramas and how storyline work. I would also take into more consideration finding suitable actors for our roles. Our actress who played “Maggie” didn’t match the description alongside the actor who played “Ben”. We struggled with the time limits that we had, so I feel that we would need to plan further ahead in the future. All in all I feel we worked well as a team. We all contributed where needed and I feel that we have all learned valuable lessons and skills from undergoing this project, and can definitely see where were would do things differently next time. 

Wednesday, 8 May 2013

Post-Production & Tutorials

Chrissie & TS are our post-production editors for the project. After we finished filming, Chrissie sat with our director and went through all the shots to see what we could use to start editing with. From this they were able to create a rough edit to show to Debbie so we could get feedback.

Friday morning we saw Debbie for a tutorial. As she had been off for a few weeks, she was unaware that we had changed our ideas from our original pitch to her. She sat and watched our film through and then gave us feedback. She was very unsure about our structure we had created from the script and gave us a lot of constructive criticism back. She noted she felt the whole story was given away in the first scene, and that we should re-think the structure of the whole film. She also picked up on the fact that there was nothing that could tell the viewer that parts of one scene were on different days, and that the fact two of our main character that were meant to be related seems extremely unrealistic, as the age gaps and accents were too different. Although we explained to her the issues we had with finding actors and changed ideas constantly, she suggested re-shooting. Due to travelling and other commitments, this wasn't an option we could use, so we had to reconsider the process we had already begun.

At the beginning of this week, Chrissie and Christie sat and reconstructed our drama, using the first scene that gave our story away as flashback throughout the film instead. 
After they had rearranged the structure, I sat in with them as Debbie took another look at the piece. Although she was still not 100% about the film, we did receive more positive feedback and she said that the new structure we had worked better. She also suggested using text to help clarify the fact time was passing and different days were approaching, and also to remove any fact that Ben and Maggie were related, so we could leave the relationship open to the audience. We also realized it would be important to have a strong sound design for both atmos and main sounds within scenes. TS went back out to record descriptive noise that we hoped would help tell the story much better. 
  

Friday, 26 April 2013

Actor Release Forms







Filming Day Two


After our long day filming yesterday, we hoped today things would run a bit smoother, and they did.
We arrived at the house to set up equipment just after midday. As our actress lived close-by, we arranged the previous day for her to meet us at the house around 1pm, giving us enough time to set up and get everything ready to start shooting.

Today we filmed the first and second scenes with Adam (Ben) and Monica (Maggie). We set up the first scene in the kitchen. Luckily it was a good day out and the amount of light coming through the windows meant we didn’t need to use the Dedo kit. Prior to Monica arriving, we also set up props we needed, such as a smashed mug on the kitchen floor.
Once Monica arrived, we introduced her to Adam and let them run through lines together whilst we made sure everything was in place.

Yesterday, we had realised moving the camera around after every piece of dialogue was extremely time consuming, so I suggested that instead, we ran through the whole scene on one establishing shot, then moved the camera to the next angle and run through the scene again, continuing in this same manner. This method proved much better for us to use and we managed to complete the scene a lot quicker than we had the previous day. The shape of the kitchen allowed us to get some effective shots that can definitely be placed together proficiently during editing.

We then headed over to Meersbrook Park nearby to film the final scene. Prior to this we had been worried about filming outside, due to unreliable weather and strong winds throughout Sheffield recently that may have proven a problem, especially for sound recording.
Luckily for us, it was a great day out, although there was still wind it didn’t prove to be such a problem. Once reaching the park, we headed right to the top of the hill to set up. This was a great location, allowing us amazing establishing shots of both the park and Sheffield.
Christie and Abi took control over the camera and shots once again. As we were outside high up, they had to battle against having so much bright natural light, nevertheless they managed to produce some great shots once again, with the odd shot maybe slightly over-exposed.

Our two actors worked really well together and once again we were more than happy with the performances they gave after not knowing each other well.
Overall, I am extremely happy with how our two days of filming turned out. After worrying about getting actors and reasonable locations, I feel it all came together well and I am looking forward to seeing the shots we have to edit and the finish production. 





Thursday, 25 April 2013

Filming Day One


Today we started our first day of filming, planning to shoot scenes 2 and 3. We met our main actor Adam (Ben) at the train station around 10:30 as he had travelled down from Preston, then headed across to Abi’s to meet our second actor, Dean (Mick) and collect all the equipment for shooting. After a short bus ride across town we arrived at the house pretty quickly.

It took a while to set up the equipment as we were not sure on how much light we would need to make the scene look realistic. Also, we soon realised one of the three Dedo lights we had brought wasn’t working. However, this wasn’t too much of a problem and we were able to light the scene well enough with the remaining two and use of natural light from the window.
During the week, we collect extra props such as takeaway boxes and cans to try and make the setting look more convincing.

Shooting the first scene out of the two we had planned took quite a long time. The most time-consuming element we found was moving the camera and tripod around after nearly every piece of dialogue due to the way we planned the storyboards and shot lists. Although it was a lot of work in a small amount of space, by shooting from so many different angles, we will have plenty of footage to play around with once it comes to editing.

Abi and Christie worked well together to collect a series of interesting shots, as well as improvising throughout to add extra shots or change things around. Chrissie, TS and I were on hand to help sound record, set up, help with extras like phone calls and move things around when needed.

Even though our actors had only known each other for a matter of actors, I feel they worked really well together and gave a convincing performance that the group were satisfied with.
Although the first day of filming was quite long, I feel it went really well. We achieved the two scenes in full that we wanted, and I feel the end product was better than what I had anticipated. 




Tuesday, 23 April 2013

Shooting Schedule


Date
Start Time
Finish Time
Scene
Page(s)
Shots
Locations
Actors
Equipment
Thursday 25th April 2013
11:00am
2:00pm
Sc. 2

Page 2, Page 3, Page  4
2.1 – 2.7
73 Sheldon Road, Sheffield
Adam Flynn, Dean Myers
Sony Z1, Tripod, Shotgun Mic, Dedo Lighting

2:30pm
3:45pm
Sc. 3
Page 4, Page 5


3.1 – 3.14
73 Sheldon Road, Sheffield
Adam Flynn, Dean Myers
Sony Z1, Tripod, Shotgun Mic, Dedo Lighting
Friday 26th April 2013
12:00pm
2:30pm
Sc. 1
Page 1, Page 2
1.1 – 1.14
73 Sheldon Road, Sheffield
Adam Flynn, Monica Gallo
Sony Z1, Tripod, Shotgun Mic, Dedo Lighting

3:00pm
4:00pm
Sc. 4
Page 5, Page 6, Page 7
4.1 – 4.19
Meersbrook Park, Sheffield
Adam Flynn, Monica Gallo
Sony Z1, Tripod, Shotgun Mic

Actress Emails - Requesting & Accepting

Emails between myself and actress we were able to acquire through another group 






Final Script


1.  INT. MODEST LIVING ROOM – MIDDAY 1.
There is a thud of something being knocked over. A mug shatters on the floor. BEN - mid-twenties, dark-haired and of medium build - and MAGGIE – mid-twenties, stern - are facing off in the kitchen; a modest but clean room. BEN is mid-sentence, starting to back away. MAGGIE is standing hands clenched, leaning forward.

BEN
(scornful, as if echoing MAGGIE’s previous words)

‘Just a phase’, I’m not some fourteen year old kid!

MAGGIE
(coldly)

You’re deluded. That’s what you are.

BEN’s grip tightens on a mug clasped in his hand.

BEN
(getting angry)

Do you think I’m doing this to hurt you? This wasn’t a choice I got to make – I didn’t choose to spend twenty years feeling 
like I’m in the wrong fucking body.

BEN gestures to his person, angrily.

(cont.)
I didn’t choose the gender I was born, and it wasn’t a fucking choice to reject it! It’s who I am! I don’t know how that’s so…so hard for you to understand!

MAGGIE

No… (pausing) no, it’s not. I don’t know why you can’t see that. Have you seen those types? Ben, you’re not one of them…
MAGGIE trails off, realising what she’s said. BEN stares.

BEN
(in disgust)

Is that really how you feel? ‘Those types’?
He angles for the door. MAGGIE starts forward.

MAGGIE

Ben—

BEN
(icily)

No, don’t bother.

MAGGIE

I’m the only person you have left… where are you gunna go now?
­BEN
Anywhere but here. So much for you being a supportive Sister!
BEN turns to leave. He is mid-stride and halfway out of the room when MAGGIE speaks again.
MAGGIE
(quietly)
If you walk out that door, don’t expect you’ll be welcome back here.
BEN
(stunned)
I won’t.
BEN exits. MAGGIE stares at the empty doorway. The front door slams shut. MAGGIE stoops to pick up the pieces of shattered china from the broken mug; when she straightens, BEN is gone.

2.  INT. MICK’S PLACE – EVENING 2.
The noise of the TV drones in the background. The tattered curtains are drawn shut, minimum light filtering through. Clothes and other various items are scattered on the floor and around the messy room. A bundle of blankets has been dumped untidily next to the sofa. An ashtray littered with cigarette butts sits square in the middle of the coffee table. Cans are scattered on the table, some empty, some half full. BEN and MICK are sitting on the sofa; BEN is hunched forward, tense, MICK leans back, relaxing into the sofa. BEN flicks his cigarette into the ashtray. He stares at the TV, clearly not paying attention to the images on screen.
MICK
(casually)

(cont.)
So she told you if you walked out you couldn’t come back?
MICK looks at BEN, who seems to suddenly realise MICK is speaking to him and glances up.

BEN
(nodding)

Said I shouldn’t expect to be welcome back there (pausing; bitterly) -- like I’d want to go back after that?

MICK
(frowning, and finishing his cigarette, he puts it in the ashtray)

You can’t think like that, kiddo. She’s family. She’ll come around.

BEN turns to look at MICK, incredulously.

BEN

How long have you known Maggie for? (he takes a swig of his drink, pausing) She’ll never agree with it. Too set in her ways. (he begins to look visibly upset, looking at the floor instead of MICK) Just so afraid of change. Y’know?

MICK
(sympathetically)

You can’t seriously believe that – you don’t actually believe she’d rather lose you than try and accept this?

A pause. BEN slams his can on the coffee table and sits forward, putting his head in his hands. MICK embraces him tightly. The silence lingers further, punctuated by the drone of a reality show on the TV in the background, and BEN sighs heavily. MICK squeezes his shoulder and stands up, stooping to pick up the bundle of blankets on the floor.

MICK

C’mon. You just need to get some sleep. (attempting to be lighthearted, he nudges BEN again) Bet you’re fucking knackered, eh?

BEN
(agreeably)

Mm… (he stands up and turns off the TV, reaching out to take some of the blankets from MICK) thanks for letting me crash.

MICK
(shooting BEN a shit-eating grin)

S’alright, not like you’ve got any other mates is it?
BEN snorts and punches him in the shoulder. Together they throw blankets and pillows messily on the sofa.

3.  INT. MICK’S PLACE – MORNING 3.
BEN is woken by the loud buzzing of his phone on the coffee table. His hair sticking up in all directions and his clothes in disarray, he jolts upright, throwing the blankets off himself in the process. He picks up the phone, to see the caller ID is MAGGIE. Indecisive, his thumb hovers over the ‘answer’ button, but after a moment of hesitation he declines the call and puts the phone back on the table, grabbing the blankets and pulling them over himself again, he goes back to sleep. The phone buzzes again in the background, ignored.
Time passes; BEN wakes up again to the sound of the phone buzzing and continues to ignore it, staring at the TV instead, which has been left on. Used cans and cigarette butts collect on the coffee table. They are soon joined by empty takeaway packets. The room becomes more decrepit as time continues to go by. On one occasion MICK walks into the room eating a packet of crisps. Hearing the phone buzzing, he goes to answer it but has his hand slapped away by BEN; shaking his head, he backs off, looking at him in confusion.

MICK

You just gonna ignore her?

BEN shrugs. MICK shakes his head again.

MICK
I don’t understand you sometimes, y’know.

BEN
(moodily)

Told me I wasn’t welcome back. Her own brother. She can fucking sit and think about that for a while.

MICK sighs and leaves the room. BEN goes back to staring at the TV, resolute.
Once again, BEN is asleep the next time his phone goes off. Sitting up, he reaches out to hit the ‘reject’ button but MICK, appearing suddenly, snatches the phone out of his hand and hits the answer button – BEN, angry, jumps up to grab the phone back but MICK holds him off with his free arm.

MICK
Maggie, hey, how are- yeah he’s here … you wanna talk to him? Uh huh? I’ll pass you on…

Turning, he offers the phone to BEN, who refuses to accept it.

MICK

Fucking talk to her, Ben. You can fix this.

Begrudgingly, BEN nods and takes the phone.

BEN

Hey, sis.

4.  EXT. A PARK BENCH – AFTERNOON 4.
MAGGIE is already sitting on the bench, handbag beside her, hands clasped together nervously. She stares out across the park, watching other people pass by idly. BEN enters the park, can of energy drink in hand. He takes a swig from the can and noticeably pauses mid-stride when he sees MAGGIE already sitting on the bench. Taking another drink, he puts the energy drink in a bin and shoves his hands in the pockets, walking over to sit next to MAGGIE, who has already noticed his presence. She attempts a smile, which goes unreturned.

MAGGIE

How’ve you been?

BEN
(obviously angry)

How do you think I’ve been? You kicked me out, sis. Told me I wasn’t welcome to come back.

MAGGIE

I didn’t mean that – Ben, I was just angry, I was upset, you’d just told me something that –

BEN

(cutting MAGGIE off sharply) told you something that what?

There is an awkward pause.

MAGGIE

Something that – something that I have trouble coming to terms with.

BEN

You know what? You’re exactly the way mum used to be. Worse!

MAGGIE
(starting to get irritated)

You were born a boy – I just, I don’t see why’d reject that. I don’t understand why you would! Everything you’re gonna have to go through, to change who you are? Why? I just…I don’t… (she trails off, shaking her head)

BEN

You know what I don’t understand – why you can’t accept the decisions I’ve made. Why you can’t be there when I need you to, even if you don’t agree with this. (he pauses) Why did you even want to talk to me, sis? You haven’t changed at all.

MAGGIE

I wanted to try—

BEN

No you didn’t. You wanted me to change my mind.

MAGGIE
(placing a hand on his arm)

Ben—

BEN
(shrugging her away)

Don’t bother.

BEN stands up, stuffing his hands in his pockets again, and walks away without looking back. MAGGIE stands up as though to follow him, but thinks better of it, and is left standing, watching him leave.

Finding Actors


Over the weekend, we had some luck with finding actors. We were able to secure one of the male roles that had shown interest in the previous weeks, as well as contacting another male through Christie that would be able to film Thursday & Friday this week. As he would be travelling from Preston, we arrange to pay for travel expenses for him. We had also had an actress suggested by James Webb who had auditioned for their drama, but looked too old for the role they were casting. After passing me her details, I was able to contact her to ask if she would be interested in the role. Luckily, she replied almost instantly and after reading our script said she loved the idea behind it and would be more than happy to help us out this week.
With all three actors in place and able to film Thursday and/or Friday, we could go ahead with definite arrangements and schedules.

Sunday, 21 April 2013

Storyboards

Storyboards created by Abi






Shot List


Name of Production:  “Changes”
Director: Christie Rae
Producer: Dani O’Toole

Shot
Location
Type
Description
1.1
Maggie’s House
Fade in
Fade into scene from black
1.2
Maggie’s House
MS, Stationary
Ben backing away from Maggie
1.3
Maggie’s House
CU, Stationary
Ben “Just a phrase…”
1.4
Maggie’s House
OTS/CU, Stationary
Maggie “You’re deluded…”
1.5
Maggie’s House
ECU, Stationary
Ben tightens grip on mug
1.6
Maggie’s House
MCU, Two-Shot focus, Stationary
Ben “Do you think I’m doing this…”
1.7
Maggie’s House
MS/MCU, Stationary
Ben gestures to himself angrily
1.8
Maggie’s House
CU, Stationary
Maggie’s face, “No, it’s not…”
1.9
Maggie’s House
W/S, MS, Stationary
Maggie trails off, distance between
1.10
Maggie’s House
W/S, Stationary
Ben walks towards doorway/camera
1.11
Maggie’s House
MS, Stationary
Ben turns to leave
1.12
Maggie’s House
OTS, Stationary
Ben leaving room
1.13
Maggie’s House
CU, Stationary
Maggie’s face after Ben leaves
1.14
Maggie’s House
MS, Stationary
Maggie picks up the mug
2.1
Mick’s house
ES, Stationary
Establishing shot of Mick’s place
2.2
Mick’s house
ECU, Stationary
Ashtray with cigs on table
2.3
Mick’s house
W/S, Stationary
Ben and Mick on the sofa
2.4
Mick’s house
MS, Stationary
Side of Ben’s face
2.5
Mick’s house
W/S, Stationary
Ben and Mick on sofa
2.6
Mick’s house
MS, Stationary
Mick picking up blankets
2.7
Mick’s house
W/S, Stationary
Mick gives Ben blankets
3.1
Mick’s house
MS, Stationary
Ben reaches for his phone
3.2
Mick’s house
ECU, Stationary
Phone screen, Ben presses ‘ignore call’
3.3
Mick’s house
MS, Jump Cuts/Tracking
Ben on the sofa throughout the week
3.4
Mick’s house
MS, Tracking
Camera tracks Mick
3.5
Mick’s house
OTS, Low Angle, Stationary
Looking at Mick
3.6
Mick’s house
OTS, MS, Stationary
Ben shrugs
3.7
Mick’s house
MCU, Stationary
Mick’s face
3.8
Mick’s house
MCU, Stationary
Ben on sofa
3.9
Mick’s house
W/S, Side Angle, Stationary
Mick sighs and leaves room
3.10
Mick’s house
W/S, Stationary – (Fade)
Shot of room
3.11
Mick’s house
ECU, Stationary
Phone changing hands
3.12
Mick’s house
MS, Stationary
Ben jumps up
3.13
Mick’s house
MCU, OTS, Pans Over
Mick on phone/gives phone to Ben
3.14
Mick’s house
CU, Stationary
Ben’s face
4.1
Park
ES, Panning
Establishing shot of the park
4.2
Park
W/S, Stationary
Maggie sat on bench
4.3
Park
MS, Stationary
Ben’s hand with drink
4.4
Park
MS, Stationary
Ben and Maggie on bench
4.5
Park
MS, Stationary
Ben sitting next to Maggie
4.6
Park
CU, Stationary
Maggie talking
4.7
Park
MS, Stationary
Maggie and Ben
4.8
Park
ECU, Stationary
Ben holding can tightly
4.9
Park
ECU, Stationary
Maggie sitting with hands in lap
4.10
Park
Two-Shot, Stationary
Ben and Maggie during pause
4.11
Park
MS, Panning
Maggie looking at Ben
4.12
Park
CU, Stationary
Maggie getting irritated
4.13
Park
MS, Stationary
Ben talking
4.14
Park
ECU, Stationary
Maggie’s lips while speaking
4.15
Park
CU, Stationary
Ben crushing can in hand
4.16
Park
CU, Stationary
Maggie putting hand on Ben’s arm
4.17
Park
CU, Stationary
Ben talking
4.18
Park
LS, Stationary
Ben stands up and walks out of shot
4.19
Park
OTS, Stationary
Ben still walking away over Maggie’s shoulder