Peer Review Session

Last Friday, we had a peer review session to enable us to show our work so far and get some critical feedback. Unfortunately due to illness, I couldn't attend the session, however, Sophie took the feedback given to me and discussed the changes we could make over the weekend.
Below are some of the advise we were given for our experimental piece during that session:

- great atmos

- good use of interview style

- not clear answers

- need to lower levels

- too much space between each

 answer

- try to isolate the chant

- can't always understand what 

the people are saying

- like the little girls speech

- like the horses trotting 

and the football

 stadium noises + chants

good football atmosphere -

idea and concept -  

tells a story - different perspectives -